Wednesday, February 13, 2008

Valentines Day Haiku Competition

Okay... it's last minute, but I need advice on my valentines day haikus by the end of the day today...

Here they are:

(About candy hearts):

Kiss me, Cutie pie
Sweet sentiment but is very
Chalky in my mouth

(About chocolate):

Surprisingly bitter
but warmth begins the melt
and sweetness remains

(About dirty stuff):

Enveloped in darkness
a strong hand and a soft spot
All is forgotten


Kali said...

Dear Kathryn:

I am big fan of the first one, but for some reason Cutie Pie, is not my favorite phrase. I have bad memories of that particular candy heart....


craige said...

Sorry I missed this. Which one did you go with? I think I like the chocolate one.

Kathryn said...

I went with the candy hearts one and came in second.

The winning entry, by my colleague was:

Charles Bukowski wrote
Love is a Dog from Hell and,
sadly I agree