Okay... it's last minute, but I need advice on my valentines day haikus by the end of the day today...
Here they are:
(About candy hearts):
Kiss me, Cutie pie
Sweet sentiment but is very
Chalky in my mouth
(About chocolate):
Surprisingly bitter
but warmth begins the melt
and sweetness remains
(About dirty stuff):
Enveloped in darkness
a strong hand and a soft spot
All is forgotten
3 comments:
Dear Kathryn:
I am big fan of the first one, but for some reason Cutie Pie, is not my favorite phrase. I have bad memories of that particular candy heart....
Kali
Sorry I missed this. Which one did you go with? I think I like the chocolate one.
I went with the candy hearts one and came in second.
The winning entry, by my colleague was:
Charles Bukowski wrote
Love is a Dog from Hell and,
sadly I agree
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